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I got carried away by emotions
Far away from where I belong
But I did not find a way to deal with it
I just followed the road

Last week
My head were filled with mess
My heart was split up in two
My legs wanted to run forever
My eyes wanted to sleep

I tried to keep it all together
The one true thing I thought I could repair
You did not touch me as you used to
I was to blind to see it all

Yesterday
I was on my own
I felt like a black hole
I was looking forward
I did know that the show had to go on

I see the sun outside, it’s shining for me
To show me that I must treat every day as my last
Take care of my friends and get new ones
I will from now trust my angels who are watching over me

Now
I smile at my friends
I know I will survive
I am taking a step forward
I see the world with new eyes

But listen and think when I say:
How strong do you think I am?
Who choose to be alone?
Do I spend my time waiting for you?

Do I deserve less or more?
How many times did I have sand in my shoes?
How long time will it take to clean it up?
Would really like some comments on this one
:iconcadjee:
cadjee Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
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Really beautiful! Especially the ending.

"How many times did I have sand in my shoes?
How long time will it take to clean it up?"

What a great metaphore. :)


Hope you'll get through this, my friend. :hug:
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Melvisa Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
Thanks for the comment cadjee, :)
Like that metaphore too, thought long about it and felt it was right to put it in this piece.

I will come through this somehow..
I have great friends so :)
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